Hi all!!!! Here I am with the new chapter of " Tides ", namely the next to last ( this make me sad...). I hope you'll enjoy this chapter too - we are so near to the end , :-( - and I really, really look forward to you comments & criticisms!!! *smook Title Chpt 21 : The final count-down Characters in this chapter: Akihito, Asami, FeiLong, Hikaru (OC) Rating of the chapter...
Erhm... I'm very sorry because of the delay on posting my new chapter of "Can't turn bck the tides", so please excuse me ^__^... I wanna also say that after chapter 21 ( that will be post ASAP), there is only another one + Epilogue..so... hang in ghghgh SMOOOK!!!!
... whipping at the waves like an angry lover beating on pillows. Blanketed in former glory, we see nothing but the golden shades of love, and like children we believe that all is well in green tides. There is hurt and fear and raindrops in my soul. I look outward with nose pressed to the glass, waiting for the time I am strong enough to shatter through. I see weather-lashed wavelets, foaming...
Thanks to my wonderful beta-reader, here it is the new chapter, that I feared it could be post only next week. I look forward for your comments and criticisms: They help me to continue the story ;-...liquid but his heart skipped a beat when, without a reason, the stem of the glass broke in two pieces in his hand and a little drop of his blood fell on the smooth surface of the bar.
...thereof. {S} The Solar Eclipse only occurs at a new moon. A total eclipse is rare, because it's only when the moon is closest to the earth, and lines up perfectly with the sun. It creates higher tides, because the sun's and moon's gravity are aligned. Additionally, the moon's gravitational pull on the tides is at it's strongest because it is closest to the earth. A Solar Eclipse was often seen...
Another chapter ^__^. I hope you'll like it and look forward for you comment and criticisms *___* . Title Cpt 14 : Going back Series: Viewfinder Characters in this chapter: Akihito, Asami...that marks me. In my flight to Tokyo, after five years of exile, I feel a bit of exaltation. Asami Ryuichi, before I kill you, I’ll take away everyone you care for. Again."
New chapter! I wait for you comment and criticisms ^__^ Title Cpt 13 : Red Moon Characters in this chapter: Akihito, Asami, FeiLong, OC Rating of the chapter : Almost work safe - hints of...an unannounced visit at his headquarters on the beach! ~ to be continued ~ (**) The Merchant is ispired from a character from a radio drama I listened some years ago and loved very much !
...ragged black hair shading his respectfully downcast eyes. "That girl," Tsukimaru said. "The one with hair like sakura in spring. Find her." The guard nodded. --from "Undertow" (the semi-sequel to Tides , in which we follow Team 7's mission to assassinate a River Country lord and his heir, from the heir's POV. Atmospheric, and one of these days I really will get around to finishing it.) -----...
